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Repentance

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A young lady is dancing in a field of poppies...Every dancing step she makes and a flower withers...
The wind which blows suddenly makes her stop her cursed dance.
She sighs , rubbing a hand through her hair, as she starts singing a song.
A song about remorses...
A little boy who hears the song , approaches her with curiosity.
Although, we can't blame him for being curious.
The lady has crimson red hair , skin white as the snow , bloody red lips.
She wears a black dress , which matches the color of her eyes.
What a terrifying and outstanding creature she is.
As she notices the boy , she stops her song and approaches him.
Poor boy...The moment he looks into her eyes , is the moment that he looses his eyesight.
'' What is happening?'' The boy asks , scared.
'' Exactly , as I had imagined it. You , people , know how to use my name but you can't even look at me in the eyes.'' Her words are full of venom.
The little boy begs for help , only to receive a hysterical laugh.
'' Why are you so evil?'' He asks, trying to ignore the fear and the lady frowns.
'' Evil?...Yeah, maybe I am. But , you people are responsible for this. You, who regret so easily about something and yet you do nothing about it. I am sick of hearing your cries, as you are calling my name, taking vows that you will break soon enough. Do you, people , even understand the meaning of my name?''
'' What is your name?''
The terrifying lady , falls silent for a moment.
'' Repentance. My name is Repentance.'' She answers , and disappears all of a sudden from the withered field , leaving the now blind boy behind...
Truly, what a terrifying creature she is...
It's easy to regret about something. The hard part is to do something about it...

I want to thank the lovely :iconfrozenmistress: for the amazing picture that she made.
Here is the picture [link]
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Dark-Primrose-11's avatar
Oh my!What a climax!I loved the flow of it and the powerful ending!