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Rain

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It rains.
Drip drop.
Always the same sound.
This rain is endless.
It's falling down ,
washing away our sins.
We are now clean.
But we will sin again tomorrow.
Because this dullness doesn't suit us.
We wear our masks for too long.
We don't want to take them off.
This rain is going to destroy them.
It's our enemy.
Make it stop.
We have to make it stop.
It will take away our perfect disguise.
And  we will be naked in front of the world.
Drip drop.
The lies are fading.
How are we going to live now?
This shelter we had built is old.
It is collapsing under the truth.
Because the rain is the truth.
The truth we have hidden behind our little finger.
That life is not exciting unless we lie.
But lies are for the dreamland.
Reality is made of truth.
But we think that the truth is dull like the rain.
So we open our umbrella and keep going.
Drip drop.
We cover our ears.
Our eyes are closed.
And just like that we keep living
...in a dreamland.
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mangangelo's avatar
I really really loved reading your poem.
Ειδικά το τελευταίο μέρος με την ομπρέλα δεν με συγκίνησε ε απλά, με ταρακούνησε. 
The fact that we prefer to hide the truth, even from ourselves drives us into oblivion. In the end we lose our identity and our true feeling to the world :(
The point is waking up..and you just woke us  in the most creative and successful way.